RWA's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[John of War]

I will leave a serious review...

Lol jk, cock joke! :P

Great idea, and well developed, tablet or not. Keep it up!

[Pico Day]

Interesting...

Although there are things that normally urge me to lower the rating a bit, I will give this submission a 10 regardless, because I can see that a lot of work has gone into this piece of art (and from personal experience I know things sometimes get screwed up :P).

I will still name the things I believe can be improved, so you can have that in mind when drawing next time:

- in some places there is too much folding of the clothes than it should be (like on the left forearm)
- in my opinion, feet/shoes don't go with the perspective of the overall character (they should be brought more up on the y axis)- I love how you highlighted the collar bones, but they should be a little bigger and a bit more separated

Besides that, I love how you made him into a joker-face "why-so-serious" smile character. Hands, guns and face were drawn great, and the folding on the shirt end/pants gives him a natural look. Simple background (great choose of color btw) makes it easy to focus on the character.

Hope you will consider my suggestions. Overall, great piece of art, will be looking forward to your next work! (and as Kinsei01 already said, you should do Nene and Darnell).

5/5 10/10

Lazymodecomics responds:

Thanks for the detailed review. I think after I get a chunk of my TOFA animation done I'll do Nene and Darnell.

-Jake

[Told You I Would Eat You]

Awesome!

Great and funny pic! Told ya WGJ4K would look best in your style! ;)
And congrats on it getting on the calendar!

MarcyVF responds:

Thanks bro!!! :)